Thursday, July 28, 2011
Learning How Much I Get Wrong While Editing
Take my current endeavor for example. I'm tightening up my manuscript to hand over to Davin for the critique I won. I started out just working on the end because it wasn't really as good as I wanted it to be. But as I started reading through the story, I found huge errors. Like when I realized I'd had my main character being aware of things (aka more omniscient) than he should be. I was explaining the story via the character's internal mental dialogue rather than letting him learn things in a more natural way. Yeah, not a great way to showcase my writing ability.
So now I'm overly aware of this trait and I'm finding I did this more often than I thought. Wow, what a newbie mistake. On the good side, I'm catching these things where I might not have before. So I guess I can say I'm getting better at correcting myself, even if I haven't yet learned not to make these errors while I craft the initial story. Baby steps they may be, but at least it's a form of progress.
What big mistakes do you see as you go back to edit your work?
Wednesday, July 27, 2011
Call Me Hypocritical
I read a review of the Captain America movie, and the person writing the review expressed how much she disliked it. Since I thoroughly enjoyed the movie, I felt compelled to express my opinion in the comments. I wasn't overly rude (at least I don't think so), but after re-reading what I had said, I almost felt a little bad about it.
I'm fairly certain I didn't hurt any feelings, but nonetheless I worry a little what impressions I leave with people when I comment on blogs. And here is where the hypocrisy rears its head.
See, I consider myself fairly laid back when it comes to how people respond to my posts.I'm not usually offended or hurt by anything said to me or about my writing. By contrast, I'm extremely sensitive to how I communicate to others and what I post in comments. It's my own personal hypocrisy perhaps, but there it is.
This isn't a post discovering anything new; I'm just relating something that popped in my head. But if anyone wants to add to the topic, feel free.
Tuesday, July 26, 2011
Monday, July 25, 2011
Yes, Comic Books Do Have Storylines!
This past weekend we went to see Captain America. I won't spoil it for anyone other than to say that it was awesome and well worth seeing. The funny thing though is that my wife found it boring.
I think the problem is one of assumptions and expectations. I am willing to bet my wife was expecting more action and grandiose special effects. I don't think she expected a well developed and nicely told storyline, which is one of the things I noticed and enjoyed most about this film. So I'm guessing this is why it didn't match her expectations.
It got me to thinking about comic books and the assumptions some people make. It's likely that a number of people don't consider storyline a necessary part of comics, and those of us who have read (yes I call it reading) them over the years know better. I'm certain there were tons of amazed viewers when The Watchmen came out on the big screen, even though us fans knew how intricate and developed the story is.
Much like any book published, comics have detailed stories to tell and the authors/artists live and breathe their characters just like we do as we write our own stories. It's nice to see that filmmakers are beginning to understand the necessity for a good story in addition to action scenes rather than trying to ignore that aspect of comics (or worse, they try to rewrite an already well-written storyline).
Do you enjoy good storylines in comic book movies or do you prefer them to just show the action? Would you watch if they WERE just action-fests?
Thursday, July 21, 2011
Under Pressure
The good thing is that I'm feeling a bit of pressure to have my manuscript up to their standards. I have been in editing mode and I'm close to having one ready, but I can't deny that there is a little voice worrying about what comments I might get. I say the pressure is good though because it has me motivated to get it done. This is a grand opportunity to get feedback from writers I highly respect. Oh, and if any of them are reading this, don't feel like you have to pull any punches; I prefer brutal honesty over niceties any day.
On another front, I've got pressure to finish the Hacking and Countermeasures class I'm in. I've just got one more Powerpoint to create and that one is in the bag. It's been an interesting class, even if it has involved lots of paper writing and Powerpoint presentations. I've got til the end of the month for that one though, so I'm happy to be ahead a little bit.
Lastly, I've got some pressure to beat my best and oldest friend at Words With Friends, an app he introduced me to on my phone. It's a Scrabble kind of game, and since I'm the bookworm/writer between the two of us, there's no way I'm going to let him win. It's been neck and neck though, and I'm pleasantly surprised at how much competition he's been thus far. I'll never live it down if he beats me.
Anyone else feeling pressure lately? Here's a little Queen to help you through.
Tuesday, July 19, 2011
Friday, July 15, 2011
An Inconvenient Story
"Don't pick anyone before Achilles gets here. He's the best in the school with a spear."
"Why, so we can watch him bawl if he trips over his own feet? That wimp isn't as tough as everyone thought. Hell, I could beat him up with one good sweep. Let his Mama wipe his tears again while we all laugh."
And so Achilles is picked last for spear tossing, permanently altering his life path. Imagine how hard it must have been for his Mom to discipline Achilles. It's not like she could spank him, since he wouldn't really feel it. I can see her going back to the river to dip her hand in, just so she could smack his butt when he got out of hand.
Where I'm going with this is the idea of convenience. The myths ignore all these possibilities because it's more convenient to say he was perfect (except for an understandably over-inflated ego) and didn't have to deal with these types of trivial things. He had the convenience of an easy upbringing where damage to his heel (and therefore his life possibly) was never an issue.
To tie this in with my own writing, I have an issue in a WiP. In the beginning of story my MC runs into a pretty girl working in a coffee shop. When I first wrote it, she was intended to be a way to further illustrate how my MC deals with the opposite sex rather than being an important character. But when I had multiple people critique it, they unanimously expressed the idea that these two should be involved more in some way. After giving it some thought, I have come to agree with them. My problem is how to make that happen.
After briefly meeting her, my MC spends his last bit of money on two bus rides across town. The rest of the story (so far anyway) takes place on that side of town. In order to have these two meet up, I would have to conveniently allow them to see each other again. I haven't really come up with a good way to make this happen, but I'm hoping it will come to me soon.
Convenience in a story is irritating. I dislike it in writing, and I especially dislike it in movies. I'm trying to learn how to write things more smoothly so that I avoid this type of thing, but I can't say I've mastered it yet. I've ranted on this long enough, but I'll put the question out there for anyone that has any good ideas. How do you avoid convenience in your writing?
Have a nice weekend everyone.
Tuesday, July 12, 2011
Ten Word Tuesday - Perfect Irony
Monday, July 11, 2011
Typing On A Galaxy Tab
In other news, I received Davin's book in the mail and am enjoying the short stories between homework assignments. I also am hoping to use this tablet for writing, since the physical footprint is so much smaller and convenient than my laptop. Not sure about my typing speed on it, but anything that gets me to write is a good thing. Lastly, I hope to see the doctor about my hand maybe tomorrow. I'm hoping for just physical therapy to get me back into shape.
That's enough for now (I'll put a link in for Davin's book later). Hope everyone has a great rest of your Monday.
Friday, July 8, 2011
Just A Quick Note
Anyway, I hope everyone has a great weekend and I should be back in the swing of things next week.
Wednesday, July 6, 2011
Blog Chain - You Sure About That? Look It Up!
The ever-awesome Michelle McLean has asked us an interesting question:
Blog Chain - I Be Cursed!
Curses, you've been cursed! You can write no longer. The story well has run dry, and you can't even remember how to type. Now what do you do? Where do you channel your creative energies? And to what lengths would you go to break the curse?
OMG! You mean I can't sit at my desk and stare at the blank screen begging for inspiration and wit to arrive? This curse assumes that writing is all about the typing and creation, but the dry wells are part of the writing process as well. Not knowing how to type would be a hindrance for sure though, especially since my day job requires it LOL.
I'd love to say that I would die an agonizing death, my fingers curling up into poisonous claws and my body withering to nothing but bones and sinew. Unfortunately, I have not yet had "the call", where my mind thinks of nothing but writing day and night. If anything, this is the aspect of writing I agonize over - that I am not as entrenched in the writing world as I should be. I agonize right now because I can't seem to live and breathe this stuff yet.
I do admit however, that since I do dream of being a real writer some day (kind of like Pinocchio but with no strings or rapidly growing nose), what the curse would cause me to wail about is the destruction of this dream. Right now, I strive towards this goal, hoping that one day I will awake with a furious need to write. If I didn't have that, what would I do with all my spare time (that stuff that I seem to lack but everyone else seems to have tons of). To break the curse, I'd probably have to go rent a cabin in the mountains, hire some ancient looking medicine man, and dance around the bonfire howling at the moon. Then if that didn't work, maybe I'd go stalk Jamie Ford until he made a blood pact with me, which would surely kick start the creative juices (or get me thrown in jail, where I could write a memoir detailing the experience).
Now it's your turn. What would you do if something this horrendous happened to you? Oh, and I strongly advise you start at Kate's blog and read through everyone else's responses. There's some great stuff there.
Monday, July 4, 2011
My Absence Has Been Longer Than Expected...But I'm Back!
Epcot however, is a completely different story. For one thing, it seemed like there were a lot less crowds. The entertainment is also geared towards a more adult crowd, which appeals to me more as well. Since I don't have little ones (mine are growing up faster than I want them to), all the cutesy little kid stuff isn't as much fun. I could go back to Epcot multiple times, while I'd be fine with skipping all the other Disney theme parks ever again.
Since returning home, I've had to scramble to get back to work and back into the mode of doing homework (and it hasn't been easy). Suffice it to say that after 2 weeks of vacation, I'm feeling a bit overwhelmed with "normal life". And as for writing...well, I'm fitting it in wherever I can get a spare moment.
On the good side, I found an awesome deal for a motorcycle (a divorcee getting rid of her ex's bike that she doesn't ride), so now I'm riding again. Check out this beautiful bike:
As part of celebrating Independence Day here in the Good Ole USA, I went on a nice motorcycle ride with the members of my wife's family who are also bikers. In fact, my brother-in-law gave me some really nice saddle bags he had sitting in his garage, so now I don't have to buy those. I don't have new pics of how the bike looks with them on, but trust me - it's B-E-A-UTIFUL!
For those of you in America, I hope your 4th of July celebrations are safe and full of fun. I'm not a big fireworks person myself, mostly because I grew up in a household with a firefighter dad. I like watching them though, so we may go outside this evening and see what we can see. And for those of you who are military or related to them, thank you for continuing to honor and work for the ideals we're celebrating today.
Thursday, June 9, 2011
Contest Results And A Brief Hiatus
Tuesday, June 7, 2011
Blog Chain - Rules? We Don't Need No Stinkin' Rules!
There are SO many writing rules, but sometimes we have to break one or two, just to keep things interesting. Is there a writing rule you've broken on purpose? Why did you choose to break it? And if you want to post a snippet of your writing as an example, even better!
For once, the question at hand is an easy one for me. Why do I consider this one easy? Because this question assumes that I know what the writing rules are and that I go ahead and break them on purpose. Forget it, Abby. I'm lucky if I can even recognize when I'm breaking a rule, let alone do it on purpose.
I'm being slightly facetious of course, but the truth is that I write more by feel than by technique. If a turn of phrase doesn't sound right to me, I alter it. I do pay attention to the basics, such as not writing in a passive voice for example. But I don't have any sort of educational background in writing and so I'm just learning as I go. I will say that I'm a fan of certain broken rules, such as writing short spasms rather than complete sentences. In the right moment, that one can have a lot of impact.
I'm not going to add a snippet, just because as I've said, I am not sure I'd know which snippet is a good example of a broken rule. I'm not trying to avoid the situation, but I am aware of when I'm in over my head. And at least for right now, recognizing all the right rules is an area where I'm in over my head. On the other side of this coin though, I do try and learn about the rules all the time. I pay attention to what all my fellow writers say and read blog posts by my favorite authors/agents/writers on the subject. So who knows, maybe someday later I will be able to proudly say I do break a couple rules on purpose - and even know which rule I am breaking.
That's all I have to say on this subject. I hope this will count for my bloghop post, even though I haven't really identified a broken rule LOL. If you haven't had the chance to read Michelle McLean's awesome answer from yesterday, get on over there. Tomorrow we can look forward to something truly revealing from that writing wizard we all know as Margie. Oh, and if you haven't entered my contest for the free copy of Across The Universe by Beth Revis, make sure you do. The contest ends tomorrow!
Which rules have you broken on purpose? And why did you choose to do so?
Monday, June 6, 2011
Monday Discussions - Parental Obligations
Cue Jeopardy music
Okay, everyone caught up now? If you decided not to burden yourself with reading the article, I'll quickly summarize. The author of the article is lamenting about the more dark nature of YA books these days and Shaun's post is a rebuttal (kind of). As you can see from my comment on Shaun's post, I tend to agree with his thoughts on the subject.
But this post is kind of an off-shoot discussion. From my perspective (as a parent AND a writer), the problem of whether YA books are too dark or not is irrelevant. The idea itself can be argued both ways, and there are understandable reasons for why (cultural and societal changes, acceptability of profanity as a norm by many, etc). What is more important to me is the discussion of parental responsibility.
See, I'm one of those people who feel parents are completely responsible for everything their child is involved with (to the age of 18 anyway). Even when the parent isn't aware of a particular situation (i.e. a kid making pipe bombs in the basement), the parent is still responsible. It's part of being a parent, whether we like it or not. It behooves us then to be deeply involved with whatever our child is doing, even when being that way might seem intrusive at times. I don't care if my sons are mad that I ask what they're reading every time they pick up a book. There is no expected right to privacy in my household (even though I do grant them a level of privacy all the time).
When it comes to what books my sons are reading, I know because I talk to them about their book choices. I ask them their thoughts on a given story. In other words, my kids and I communicate all the time. Strange concept these days maybe, but I believe in it whole-heartedly. And though it's possible they could be reading something I'm not aware of, I find it doubtful. You see, my kids actually like that I show interest in what they read and what their opinions are, so I don't believe they mind when I intrude on their choices.
I guess my point is that instead of bemoaning the dark nature of YA literature these days, we should be helping to guide parents towards being more actively involved with their kids. Authors will write whatever they want to write and publishers will continue to publish it, but if it's unacceptable reading for your kids and you have guided them away from it, it becomes a non-issue.
And speaking of Shaun, I am going to be actually meeting him in person (hopefully) when my family travels down to Florida next week. Yep, I'm going to be basking in the Florida sunshine starting next Sunday, and sometime during our 10 day visit (at Disneyworld, no less) I may be lucky enough to meet the incredibly talented Mr. Hutchinson. Maybe some of his awesome skills will rub off on me, huh? I don't know what I'm more excited about, getting to see Mickey with my kids or being able to introduce them to Shaun.
I'm hoping for a lively discussion of the topic at hand though, so feel free to step up on a soapbox in the comments. Even if you disagree with me, feel free to say so. I don't take anything personally. Oh, and if you haven't entered my contest for a free copy of Across The Universe, get over there and do so. Time is running out.
Friday, June 3, 2011
Celebrating Possession
So what is Possession? Rather than explain in my own meager way, here's a quote from the book's site itself:
Vi knows the Rule: Girls don't walk with boys, and they never even think about kissing them. But no one makes Vi want to break the Rules more than Zenn...and since the Thinkers have chosen him as Vi's future match, how much trouble can one kiss cause? The Thinkers may have brainwashed the rest of the population, but Vi is determined to think for herself.
This is a game of control or be controlled. And Vi has no choice but to play.
This story will be nothing short of spectacular, of that I'm sure. Elana is a masterful storyteller and I cannot wait to pick up my copy. I will probably do a more thorough review of it later too. This is one of my most anticipated reads, particularly since I have always been impressed by Elana's knowledge of craft and her ability to spin an entertaining yarn - regardless of the topic. Her blog is a must-read every day.
Also, if you haven't had a chance to enter the contest I'm running for a free copy of Beth Revis' book Across The Universe, make sure you get over there right now. Time is running out and that's another book everyone absolutely must read.
Finally, here's a funny video to keep you laughing on a Friday. After all, Friday should be about fun. And what's more fun that laughing along with Weird Al. That dude is awesome! Have a nice weekend everyone.
Wednesday, June 1, 2011
Unintentional Isolation...And A Contest!
My mom and I were discussing this trait we both share. Although we can exist just fine in a crowded room, we're much happier by ourselves. The problem is that I do actually enjoy the stimulating conversations and things I learn from friends. Withdrawing into seclusion makes me miss out on all this fun stuff. Needless to say, I am aware of the problem and am going to be taking steps to make sure I don't do this too often.
On another note, I am in possession of an extra copy of Beth Revis' awesome book Across The Universe. How did this happen, you ask? Well, I purchased a copy when it came out (because I was incredibly anxious to read it). I also helped chat up Beth's book whenever I could help get the word out, and unexpectedly in the mail, I received a SIGNED copy of her book from Beth and/or the publisher. This means I have opportunity to hold a contest and give my other copy away to some lucky recipient (sorry, I'm not giving away my signed copy. I cherish it way too much).
And although it might be difficult to find someone out there who hasn't purchased this awesome book already, I'm willing to try. If you have a copy already, enter the contest anyway and give this one away to someone else. Let's pass this awesome book on to as many people as we possibly can.
The contest is going to go like this. I'll hold the contest for a week (ending on June 8th) and send the book out to a random winner. Unfortunately, this is only for people in the US. Sorry, but I can't afford to send this overseas. But hey, if you're near Beth or find her near your town sometime, I'm sure she'll be more than happy to sign it for you. She's cool like that. You can also earn extra entries:
Comment here - +1
Long time follower - +2
New follower - +1
Post about the contest - +1
Facebook about the contest - +1
Tweet about the contest - +1
Tally the total for me - +1
Those who know me well might wonder why I'm adding in the Facebook and Twitter stuff, since I don't currently use those social tools. I'm all about getting the word out and getting this book to a new loving owner though, so I'm embracing those tools too. I'll depend on the honor system. If you say you've done it, I'm just going to take you at your word. I personally haven't seen any writers lie about something like that, so I feel pretty safe.
Lastly, do you ever feel isolated from things here on the Interwebs? If this is just me, feel free to say so. If not, what do you do to stay a part of these social connections (aside from FB or Twitter)?




